User:Emnets/Self-pity/Brandon R Hill Peer Review

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(Emnets/Self-pity/Brandon R Hill Peer Review)


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the information you added helps the reader differ between some concepts that may be similar to self-pity. In addition, adding in information that supports background knowledge with references was helpful as the page lacked citations.