User:Emnets/Self-pity/Ebdrake Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emnets


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is relevant and all content appears relevant to the topic and easy to read/understand. All research is relevant. There could be more research, but the article is still in the beginning stages.