User:Emoe2020/Erectile dysfunction/AveryLong5 Peer Review

General info
Emoe2020
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emoe2020/Erectile_dysfunction?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Erectile dysfunction

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this article is very informative on what erectile dysfunction is. However, I think that changes in the layout could help improve this article. For instance, in the "causes" section, instead of bullet points, I think putting the information in paragraph format would help the article read easier. Continually, finding more information for each point could give readers a better insight on the different causes of ED. I liked that this article mentioned the different workups for ED, and I think this article does a good job of showing the options available. Towards the end of the article, I noticed that the history and anthropology is at the end. I would move the history section to right after the lead to provide a better flow of the information. The image of the newspaper article is a little bit confusing. It is hard to read the print because of the size of the image. Personally, I think it would be beneficial to explore the mental health aspects of ED. For some men, it can be embarrassing, and I would be interested to see the correlation. Overall, this article has a good tone and is unbiased. I am excited to see what you add!