User:Emoe2020/Erectile dysfunction/Callalily4 Peer Review

I think adding the "Psychological Impact" section is a great idea! I would say that this is something that is relevant to the original article. Emotions can easily skew an article from a neutral view; however, your contribution does not. By adding in the citation, you keep it neutral while also relaying the feelings one may have regarding this disorder. The second edit you made (I am assuming it is what is bolded in the "Diagnosis" section) seems out of place. The article focuses on the actual medical diagnosis. Adding in a sentence about how ED can be emasculating does not quite make sense to me here. I think that sentence would be better suited under your first contribution, "Psychological Impact." I think there is more that you can do with the section. What you have currently is a great start and fills in a gap in the article!

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