User:Emoe2020/Erectile dysfunction/MorganH2024 Peer Review

General info
Emoe2020
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Emoe2020/Erectile dysfunction
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Erectile dysfunction

Evaluate the drafted changes
There have not been edits made to Emoe2020's sandbox yet. I will be looking at the original article on Erectile Disfunction to provide feedback on what can be improved. The overall tone/languae of the article seems to be neutral. The lead encompasses information relating to what erectile dysfunction is and why it is an issue to be aware of. I would add information/do research into the Signs and Symptoms section. They have a basis, but more information is needed. I think that psychological impact (which is located under signs and symptoms) should be in its own category. Also, the history of erectile dysfunction would flow better when put after the Lead.