User:Emoe2020/Erectile dysfunction/Whitneyaj Peer Review

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Emoe2020
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


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Evaluate the drafted changes
You have done a good job listed the statistics of people suffering from ED. I might work on listing what sources those statistics are from. I might also work on building your introduction. Then let that lead into the statistics of this disorder.