User:Emperor Sheev/LGBT in Canada/Wikiassign0923 Peer Review

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Overall it seems the article LGBT in Canada can use some upgrades. An introduction that is more a comprehensive summery to start. Citations need to be updated some citations missing on facts, especially census data, and legal decisions. The history and rights sections should be larger, do not see why literature is so large. May be helpful to put in important legislative milestones and political divides to better contextualize its historical development in Canada. Maybe go into provincial rights as well. Should also mention US cultural influence as their LGBT movement impacted Canadas.