User:Empiretr00per/Don Melia/Whizkid32 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Empiretr00per's Don Melia


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Empiretr00per/Don_Melia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Concise and to the point- touched on his most important works and influence. Efficient summary of Don Melia.

Personal Life and Early Career:

Maybe split this section into 2 so you can talk more in depth about each? I would like to know a bit more about Don Melia's film work. You said that his comic works started the careers of many other comic artists- who though? Also what series did his work inspire? Definitely say who he inspired and influenced if youre going to keep that sentence.

Comics Career:

Did a great job adding detailed descriptions of all his works. However if there are less notable works that you didn't mention, then I would change the title of the section to "notable works" instead. But if that's all he published then it's perfect.

Death:

Not much to say about this. Do you maybe know where he's buried? Not necessary though.