User:Empole1/sandbox

St Kilda FC (2/18)

 * Expansion of Home Grounds Section. Focus on History of the Grounds and their relevance to the club. ✅
 * Create a "Supporters" section✅
 * Source information about demographics of the Saint's supporter base✅
 * Number One Ticket Holders?✅
 * Move Membership/Attendence there and condense the table. ✅
 * Add Sponsorships to Corporate section. ✅
 * History Cleanup✅
 * Condense the section on 2000 - 2011. 2009 and 2010 are areas of focus. ✅
 * Synthesise the dot point format (In XXXX, Y happened.) into proper paragraphs.✅
 * Remove Recentism Template ✅
 * Add Media to the History section of the page❌
 * Fix the Hall of Fame stuff. The current dot point table split is silly.✅
 * Add a Partnership section, include information about the China partnership in conjuction with Port Adelaide.✅
 * Referencing (Pagewide)✅
 * Spelling and Grammar checks✅
 * Nominate for Good Article Status✅


 * Get the article passed!

Sydney Swans (3/18)

 * Lead Changes
 * Split Premierships and Foundation VFL member✅
 * Move the reserves mention to below the Foundation VFL member in the same paragraph.✅
 * Add information such as colours behind the grounds at the bottom.Pending
 * Remove Recency section for after 2000 etc, as it's not relevant to the club as a whole like a lead should be. SHould be left with four paragraphs - Intro, Foundation VFL, Premiership and Other.✅
 * Remove references if covered elsewhere per Leadcite✅


 * History Changes
 * Merge the two history sections!✅
 * Furthermore, change the time blocks to better points of significance.
 * Pre-Sydney history.
 * Add more to pre-history sections. In particular - the entry to the VFL (which is a single sentence!). All five need doing, but this is the worst.
 * Could be worth carving out a new section for the 70s individually. Swans made the finals in 1970 for the first time in ages, and were saddled with huge debts. Worth noting seperate.
 * Merge Origins and VFA, VFL entry and first premierships. Make the split after WW1, say 1920 - then split again Post-WW2 for the unsuccessfuly period.
 * Remove Media from the pre-history, possibly relocate to elsewhere in the article.
 * Post-Sydney history
 * Cut Back
 * What is the most important, and what isn't?
 * Player Information is 100% not important, especially the way it lists out numerous players.
 * Extreme detail on unremarkable events, such as the John Longmire section having 3 paragrapahs on 2015 (where the Swans did not make the Grand Final)
 * The most detail should be on 2012 and 2005, particularly the latter due to its role.
 * Remove some media again
 * AFLW needs its own section


 * Club Identity
 * Remove the Sponsors from the text. They can have their own section.
 * Guernsey Table
 * Add Club Logo Section
 * Port doesn't need a mention in the club song section. They used the same tune, but so do many low level teams. It's not relevant to the Swan, it's relevant to the song.
 * Cover the history of the Swans' home grounds/training bases. We have the SCG, but no others like Lake Oval.
 * Rivalries
 * Update the Sydney Derby. Feel like it could do with a little more text to buff it out slightly.
 * West Coast-Sydney is dead. Make note of this in the section.
 * Photo Quality is very poor. Replacement or Removal?
 * Is Hawthorn-Sydney still alive? Also, remove recency. Hawthorn and Sydney were uncompetitive for many of the same years (50s, 60s), is there anything relevant there?


 * Players
 * Combine Reserves team into this section.✅
 * Maybe cut back on the prose for the reserves team. Good that they've got their own section, no need to go overboard for their reserves though.
 * Remove duplicate Corporate members???✅


 * Corporate
 * Add the Sponsors here. Can add a table if needbe, but not a priority.


 * Supporters
 * Text looks fine, but it may need weeding. Won't rule out changing it to focus more on fanbase demographics ala St Kilda.
 * Add Number One Ticket Holders
 * Standardise the Membership-Attendance table.


 * Partnerships
 * Are there any? St Kilda and Sydney played in Wellington, could be a possible mention. Pride match, if it's a partnership?


 * Honour Boards
 * Change the Honour Board as per other articles
 * Team of the Century + Hall of Fame + Military Service if applicable


 * Achievements
 * Club✅
 * Remove the Nil sections. Completely uneeded, it's to show achievement and having Nil is pointless.✅
 * Individiual
 * Formatting is atrocious. Must fix.✅
 * Remove the headings and replace with bold text.✅
 * If required, add more medals
 * All Australian
 * Add it! The Port Page version should be relevant as South Melbourne players qualified.


 * Records
 * Move to a seperate page/link to a seperate page. Brings too much clutter.


 * Media✅
 * Remove Media Section. Largely irrelevant to the club✅


 * See Also✅
 * Remove irrelavant links, add relevant ones.✅


 * Notes✅
 * Add this section✅


 * External Links
 * Why does it link to that documentary? Check it out, use as a ref if needed, and remove.


 * Whole Article
 * Referencing
 * Improve usage of encyclopedic language.
 * Reorder sections - Players move up to below club identity as an example✅
 * Spelling/Grammar


 * NOMINATE FOR GA

Gold Coast Suns (4/18)

 * Generalised Page Cleanup
 * Combine 2009-2011 seasons as 'Foundation'
 * Remove the templates regarding the inaugural teams, which are largely irrelevant.
 * Combine Recruitment and the above new Foundation section
 * Combine Stadium and Club Symbols
 * Remove Coaching Staff section
 * Combine the three honour boards under one universal section
 * Group the three squads (AFL, Reserves and AFLW) under one 'Players' section'
 * Move Club Records below Club Achievements
 * Expand Individual Awards.
 * Do the Suns have a Hall of Fame? If so, combine it with the honour board section.
 * Create a new supporter section
 * Include information about the supporter coverage of the Suns across QLD
 * Add the Suns TV information to this section
 * Condense the size of the Carrara section. Make note of any deals they've had (i.e Cazaly)
 * Add a Partnership section, include information about the China partnership in conjuction with Port Adelaide.
 * Add 2020/21 info if pertinent
 * Are other season results (like 2015) important? If not, remove them.
 * Referencing
 * Nominate for Good Article Status