User:EmpressKeys/sandbox

== Bio == If I tell you my real name, then I'll have to change my identity. Just kidding, I'm Lakeithia Sakin. Lakeithia Sakin (1996- Present) a vocalist, blogger, resident assistant, music enthusiast, college student, and a person embarking on a spiritual journey. How awesome is that? Lakeithia fell in love with music at a very young age. At the age of three years old, her father introduced her to artists such as "The Jackson 5", Stevie Wonder, The Temptations, The Supremes, Earth, Wind and Fire, etc. This would later inspire her to allow music to be embedded into her soul.

Wikipedia interests me, because it's cool to see a community, come together to edit a post about pop culture, as well as getting a few notes for homework assignments. A lot of professors hate Wikipedia, because they think that most of the information that's put on this platform is inaccurate, especially in pop culture. The articles that I would fix, would date back to the 90's. A lot of one hit wonder, and actors/actresses doesn't have a lot of information on their Wiki page, and I want to change that. Thanks for visiting my Wiki page.

Article review
Music is an important part of life. There are different genres that supports this topic, such as blues, jazz, bossa nova, country, etc. and the genre I decided to focus on is hip hop/rap. I searched a random music icon Marley Marl. Wikipedia page, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on structure/completeness, age and citations. When it comes down to music, research should always be accurate, and amusing. As a musician, it's important to educate the masses with accurate information, regarding the history of music. Every little thing counts, there should never be any facts left out.

Structure/Completeness
The structure of this article is nicely written, however, it's missing a few facts. Marley Marl is responsible for bringing out artist such as Roxxane Shante and The Juice Crew. I added these sentences here to Wikipedia, to point to the public, that this is what made Marley Marl's career expand.

Conclusion
In conclusion, this page wasn't half bad, however I would love to see more facts on this person. The facts that were provided were cool, but it needs more sources. It's listed at the top of this wiki page, and it has been there for the past two and a half years. Sine there aren't enough sources of this artist, it's hard to tell if this page is reliable.There's a lot of information on this page that's missing awesome facts, and if they were there, this page would really be awesome.