User:Emraeah/Dark money/Tuk28507 Peer Review

Peer Review
By Yulia

Lead
a. Potential edit is a good update and addition to article

b. This edit makes the language more clear than the original article does

c. Great intro to the article's topic

Content
a. added content is all relevant and helpful additions

b. Ideas of additional things to research and update within the article is also solid

Tone & Balance
a. A neutral and unbiased tone is used

General info
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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