User:Emschec22/Minaret/Dressytea Peer Review

General info
Emschec22
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emschec22/Minaret
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Minaret

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Great job! You seemed to have put in a lot of time into your research and added a lot of sources. Although this article seemed to be pretty thorough, you still added a lot of valuable information. Your advanced language and diction also made the article flow with its original contents. Specifically, in the functions section, it was previously stated that minarets have visual symbolic purpose, but it did not go into detail on the symbolism, and you added in that needed information. You took the time to read the article and find the gaps that needed further research. Overall, I think you are just about ready to submit your edits to the actual article!