User:Emsteacher/Digital divide/Cartwheelin*Sun Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emsteacher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emsteacher/Digital_divide?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital divide
 * Digital divide

Evaluate the drafted changes
based on what is in sandbox it appears that you are working on updating the opening paragraphs of the digital divide, in reviewing your draft against the original I didn't find any changes. I looked in the talk page but i was unable to identify what was updated in your version.

Would it be possible to share details on the talk page what was added or deleted or share directly with me what was update and I can better review for you. if I missed it my apologize, Wiki is all new to me so i am sure i could be missing something obvious.