User:Emv1997/Child psychopathology/Eoconnell36 Peer Review

Your plan to add a section that will cover psychotherapy treatments of children's mental health issues is wonderful. This article seems to be quite rooted in pharmacological/neurobiological thought, which is certainly not the only avenue of effective treatment for children. Some food for thought as you execute your plan is the placement of your section within the article to ensure that you are presenting the new information in a neutral way. For example, adding the evidence for psychotherapy within the "Treatment" section rather than creating a new title, may flow more consistently with the present content of the article. Additionally, which diagnoses will you focus on specifically? I see that the Treatment section of the article includes ADHD and comorbid OCD, depression, and BPD. Will you expand on these diagnoses or mention different ones as well?

Your idea is already a great start. Good luck with your work!