User:Enabulei/Firefly squid/Gomescl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brendan S Ng


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Enabulei/Firefly_squid


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Firefly_squid

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good job with the editing so far! I liked the addition of some new information and would love to see more (if possible) on morphology. Additionally, I noticed that the first paragraph in the anatomy and morphology section didn't have any citation. I recommend trying to always provide resources of where you found your information.

Good job with the research portion and listing all your references. I would recommend focusing on integrating more of the research and information obtained into the actual article.