User:Enabulei/Firefly squid/Tmclaughlin80 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Enabulei


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Enabulei/Firefly squid


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Firefly squid

Evaluate the drafted changes
The author has done a great job of adding informative details to the article, which generally improve the quality of the article overall. The writing flows pretty well and is neutral, however I would recommend double checking that all citations are correctly placed. I think the organization of the additions were also done well so that the article flow hasn't really changed. Overall, I think the author did a nice job with their additions.