User:Enauman20/Ngil Mask/Langgggg Peer Review

This is a good start! The content is relevant and neutral. I think it needs more sources to be notable and reliable and also expand the content you currently have written. Also images would be helpful for understanding the masks.

Maybe add a whole section on how the masks were used and add some visual analysis of how their form relates to their function-- it may seem self explanatory to you now that you've researched this topic but someone just learning about this may not have enough info to fill in the gaps. Also it might be helpful to link to other wiki pages like "Gabon" etc. to provide more info.

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