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Matilda Hall Gardner

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Personally, I chose Matilda Hall Gardner's article as subject to my thorough analysis and evaluation considering the unique and crucial key role she played for Woman Suffrage and how profoundly impactul she was, what she represented and still represents for women's right as a whole, I believe I have already heard Gardner's name being mentioned in historical, socio-political discussions in High School. Gardner lobbied Congress for equal suffrage, even writing articles describing her interactions with Congressmen. She participated in a conference with President Warren G. Harding to remove gender discrimination from federal laws. She remained insistent, though, that woman's suffrage was a pressing need even after being sentenced to a handful of different prisons and being arshly treated while imprisoned. She was also involved in organizations that pursued world peace.

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When it comes to the lead section of Matilda Hall Gardner's biography, it's noticeable the absence of an authentic and attested, objective, and informative passage regarding Gardner's article. The leading portion of Matilda Gardner's article is briefly reduced and condensed into a succint statement with no presence of any brief description of or mention to the article's major sections. There's an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly states her legal name, dates of birth and death, and that she was an American suffragist and a member of the national executive committee of the National Woman's Party. The content portrayed in the article in analysis objectively adresses Gardner's main and most impactful actions and gradual steps towards the pursuit of women's suffrage, world piece, and the abolition of gender discrimination from federal laws. In addition, important and unique historical, socio-political events that Matilda Gardner had to go through such the handful amount of times she was sentenced to prison due to her intense activism roles she played in a wide range of spheres she performed in were covered, without putting excessive emphasis on one part while neglecting another. This article was entirely written from a neutral viewpoint, not having the presence of biased statements in its composition. Facts and events displayed aout Gardner's life story are backed up by reliable sources of information produced by a wide variety of authors. This articles is concise, objective, and written making use of accessible grammar and vocabulary, being well structured and organized when it come to developing and addressing its main points. There's the presence of images of Matilda Gardner, one of them portraying her marching in Procession in 1913, visually contributing to the interpretation and understanding of the article. There's no conversation history when it comes to representing Matilda Hall Gardner's history. This article is of interest to Biography (stub-class), and Women's History (stub-class, low importance) WikiProjects. The article could be improved having a better written, more developed, and more informative leading section, providing descriptions of the article's major sections, and an overview information of the topic to its readers.