User:Enelly23/Amazon (company)/Moonwatch Snowave Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Enelly23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Enelly23/Amazon_%28company%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content:

- The content is very well written. She chose to highlight Amazon's influence on climate change and Amazon's carbon footprint. Both are relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The article is broken down properly and includes most of the relevant information

Tone:

- The tone written is very neutral and balanced, not presenting any bias. The views are correctly presented and show real intent and informative.

Sources:

- The sources and references are well matched and provide a clear understanding of what is being said and done. 4 well laid out sources are enough to prove the point.

Critiques:

- Maybe include an image or so of the actual changes that Amazon is contributing to the environment.

- Write some more about their initiatives. Amazon is such a big company and they have many more initiatives other than this

- Include what these changes has done to the environment and how much they are contributing to mitigating climate change around the world

- Include who is doing these changes and what department is responsible for taking lead