User:Eng215/Blue Quran/Shakedownstreet120 Peer Review

Eng215,

I'd like to start by saying this is some really great work! It was clear while reading through your article that you really did know what you were talking about and clearly you put the necessary time into ensuring that your paper was up to par with Wikipedias guide lines. Your article was very informative and I myself was learning things that I hadn't known before thought the duration that I was reading your paper. It was all properly cited and I even checked out some of your source and was still very pleased.

Your "Importance of the Blue Quran" section was also a very good touch and I thought it to be a fitting closer to your paper. I don't believe in writing to hit a certain word count and even though that part was a little short I believe you touched on everything that was necessary. You got the information in to the article and that's what counts.

The only thing that I saw was about you bolded section at the bottom of the history tab. You mention the Historian Yasser Tabbaa and what she had to say about the "Evanescent Effect" of the Blue Quran twice. You kind of repeat yourself twice right next to each other so I would just recommend cutting some of that part out or even just moving the paragraphs around because its not a bad thing to repeat information. After all repetition is the best way for people to learn. The only issue I found as that these two sentences are basically right next to each other since the other time you talk about Yasser Tabbaa is in the Importance of the Blue Quran section of your paper.

Other then that I think you a really good job! I hope this review was helpful or at least brightened your day.

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