User:English-3000

About me
My name is Phuong Nguyen. I'm a Vietnamese girl who was born in Ho Chi Minh city in 2001. I have been studying in the US for almost 6 years and I live with my family. One of my hobbies in my free time is listening to indie music. Indie music means Independent music. People compose, record and publish their own songs. Another hobby of mine is playing guitar to help me relax when I'm stressed. Mystery books are another favorite hobby because they are addictive; I can never stop reading detective stories.

My Wikipedia interests
Wikipedia is top of my study materials. I usually use it as a base for my research or my study. The parts which I am interested in on this website are related to History, Business and Music. I chose Business for my major so I need to do lots of research about it. I'm interested in learning about finance, stock market and marketing. If I'm active on Wikipedia in the future. I'll probably write about my life I have gone through in the past 6 years in the US. I hope to accomplish as a volunteer that gives me the opportunity to gain experience, improve my skills and build wall confidence for myself to achieve my goal prospects.

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Article evaluation
I chose randomly any Wikipedia page because I would like to try to know what I think about some of Wikipedia I haven't read and know before. So, it ends up with a "Von Iva" page that it's brand new information for me. I visited the "Von Iva" page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of its worth commenting on: structure, citations, and grammar.

Structure
I've noticed that many of Wikipedia's pages all got the articles are subject to a common page organization. For example, the first section usually introduces the article in more general and more broadly accessible terms. But, in this page, they only have one sentence for the introduction. It is short and does not have enough basic information to get to know. Moreover, in “contents”, nearly all its parts are not described in detail. For instance, in “members”, there are only their names and their positions; there are no records about their biography, for instance their age or their background.

Grammar
The system on this page uses not much information. The sentence “The band has since broken up, as the relationship between the three became more tense.” has grammar errors. Therefore, this sentence needs to be improved. For example, it can be modified to “The band broke up because their relationship became strained.” This type of grammar is usually given as a comment and is the most commonly used grammar method in Wikipedia articles.

Summary
Overall, this page is not really perfect at all. The sentence “The band has since broken up, as the relationship between the three became more tense.” has grammar errors. Therefore, this sentence needs to be improved. For example, it can be modified to “The band broke up because their relationship became strained.” Also, there are many quotes and links are not reliable that the reader can trust the information from.