User:English.pr/Japanese popular culture/Applegirl1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

English.pr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:English.pr/Japanese popular culture


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Japanese popular culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)