User:Englishbulldog2023/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Horse racing - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have an interest in horses and it drew me, it is important in history as a lot of gambling, careers, and media impact has come from horse racing. I noticed when reading it that some wording could be more concise, and some information was limited whereas there is more that should be mentioned.

Evaluate the article
I believe that the lead section has a good introductory sentence, as well as explain the major sections that are mentioned within the article. The lead is overall concise with no irrelevant information. The article is relevant to the topic and is up to date, I do think that there is some information missing such as cheating and criminal activity within the sport. Overall, it is balanced and remains a neutral tone, but I do believe the dangers section can be edited to have more of a neutral tone. Things are accurately sited and well organized. Overall, it has all of the outline for a good article that needs a few tweaks.