User:Ennisdr/sandbox

Blog Post 10/26/18

I am working on the Wiz Khalifa wiki page. So far I have been able to identify many different sources to add to the page. The sources they have are out of date and are not very reputable. Also, I have been looking into new pictures for the page as well. The pages pictures are old and do not  really help to show who Wiz really is. Also, I plan on adding information about his own record label. The page has a link to it but does not talk about it and i feel that it is a large content gap.

Review of the wiki page "Wiz Khalifa"

Overall this wiki page is laid out and formatted well. Generally, this article has a more serious tone. It seems that the author is just displaying all of the facts that have been presented. It is very straightforward and to the point. One critique that I would act on is going more in depth into Wiz's past. It seems that the author is more interested in the current life and when he became famous. I personally would want to have more of his childhood and before he was famous. Also, I like the point of view the author has taken as well. they seem to be impartial and to not be biased. They are just presenting the facts and giving no bias at all.

The other editors in the community also talked about knowing more about his past. One editor wanted to know his religion and i think that adding this information really would help. Other than that they just cirtiked the article and pointed out where there were errors.

Citations

So far the edits I have made are adding to his early life and a segment in his personal life. These edits are live and are on the page currently.