User:Enryonokatamarikun/Code Noir/Sbonesan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Enryonokatamarikun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Enryonokatamarikun/Code_Noir?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Code Noir

Evaluate the drafted changes
I reviewed your sandbox draft, the French version of Code Noir, and did a brief comparison to the English version. I found your sandbox to be well written and to provide good foundational context. There are a lot of areas to translate and/or expand on the English version. Depending on what you prefer to focus on, I found on English version lacks content in areas such as the development of slavery in the French Antilles, the elaboration of the Code noir, what inspired it and its legislative origins. Another area to potentially explore are the relationship of the Code Noir, métissage, and the cultivation of sugar cane. The French version also seems to expand on the role of the French Revolution and how the Code Noir cohabitated in the colonies with the Civil code. I found also that the origins and purpose of the Code Noir are far more developed in the French version, that gives you another area to potentially explore to increase the overall quality of the English version.