User:Environmentography/Annie Lee Cooper/JadessBlue Peer Review

1. Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
2. Is the content added neutral?

3. Is the content added well-organized?


 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Matthew and Tracen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Environmentography/Annie_Lee_Cooper?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Annie Lee Cooper
 * Annie Lee Cooper

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

To answer the first question that the editors have, yes, I do believe that the lead has a brief description of the article's major sections, just remember to include other major sections to the lead if there are more added, since you guys are still in the drafting phase. I do think that the lead is a bit vague, but then again the page is still a stub. I do think that incorporating some other activist things that she did in the lead would be nice, and then you could go more into depth later on in another category within the article.

For the second question, I do think most of the content added is neutral and I did notice word changes to make the content more neutral instead of biased compared to the live article.

Finally for the third question, I do think that there could be more organization, such as sub-headings for important topics. I think separating her life story, her work, and her activism would be a good start to make things more cohesive and flow better. I also think more info could be added to the popular culture sub-heading, since there is not a lot of information to make it important enough to have its own category in the article. If there is more information available on Annie Lee Wilkerson and her activism, I do think that would be great since this Wikipedia entry does lack some details.

One thing I think could be added would be how she contributed to the civil rights movement to fight for voting rights, specifically what actions did she take as an activist?