User:Environmentography/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Annie Lee Cooper

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
She seems like an interesting person. However, I think more research could make this article higher quality.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is good. However, it does not include a brief description of the article's major sections - there are not many, however - and there is only one sentence. It could be broken up more and be more detailed.

The content is good, but there are some word usage that could be changed to be more neutral and formal ("appalled", "prodded", "hit the sheriff in the jaw"). It could also be more detailed.

There are some good sources used to back up the information in the page. They appear to be mostly from news articles. The 7th source is blocked behind a paywall.

It is important to note that this article is about an African-American woman, one of the most underrepresented groups in America.

The tone is neutral. It is not attempting to persuade the reader in one way or another.