User:Envs2455/Hunters Point Naval Shipyard/Bbcook808 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Envs2455


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Envs2455/Hunters_Point_Naval_Shipyard?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hunters Point Naval Shipyard

Evaluate the drafted changes
Fantastic! Your body paragraph has a good flow to it and is easy to read/follow. You have lots of sources you've added and everything is properly cited it seems. I would just make sure eveything you've added is worded in a way that wikipedia likes it and to really cut down on any unnecessary words. Overall great stuff.