User:Epaniagua2000/Persistent genital arousal disorder/Srehman07 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Epaniagua2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Epaniagua2000/Persistent_genital_arousal_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Persistent genital arousal disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the section you’ve included about the treatment for PGAD has a good amount of detail, especially considering how this is a newer topic that does not have much research (as you mentioned, it has only been researched since 2001). Including the mental health impacts of PGAD is also a good choice as it is very relevant to the disorder and the resulting effects. From what I understand, mental health disorder symptoms are comorbid with PGAD and I am curious to read more about this or how mental disorders intertwine with the disorder. However, I think that a section that might be useful to expand would be on the biological bases of this disorder and any neural impacts that might result from this. Obviously, there might not be a ton of options for this as PGAD is a newer disorder and the original article explains that there is not a specific known cause. However, including more on what is currently known about the neural or biological background of the disorder might help a reader better understand where the psychological effects that you included are coming from. Apart from that, I think that this topic was a great choice and I think that what you have so far is very informative and well written!