User:Epear/Consumer activism/Jberrien23 Peer Review

General info
Epear
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Epear/Consumer activism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Does your peer have 5-7 reliable sources?
 * Yes they have 5 reliable sources that they use throughout their paragraphs.
 * Is at least one of them a source from class reading or the "suggested sources" list?
 * Yes they use information from Liz Cohen's "A Consumers Republic" 3 times
 * Does the topic link in some way to our course material?
 * Yes the topic directly links to our class, as consumer activism plays a big role in what we have learned in class.
 * Does your peer add historical context to their article?
 * Yes they talk directly about African American consumer activism and it looks like they will add a section about women's involvement in consumer activist as well.
 * Based on what you know from course content, what do you think Wikipedia users should know about this topic?
 * They should know the effect that African Americans had on consumer culture despite their ongoing fight for equality. That they still had power by using boycotts to businesses that didn't allow them to work there.
 * In other words, what would you recommend adding and/or considering further?
 * I would continue adding to the section about women and their involvement of consumer activism because they played a big role in the evolution of consumerism.