User:EpicCarnage12/Japanese Idol/Santanavictianny Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EpicCarnage12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:EpicCarnage12/Japanese Idol


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Japanese idol

Lead
I believe it's a very good start to the lead but I think it's missing a little more. I think it should give more information about the major sections in the article. It is not overly detailed which is good but it needs more information in regards to other sections of the article.

Content
The content was very relavant but also interesting. you added information and topics that weren't there, like the information about johnny's entertainment. I feel like you can add more in regards to that if you want to extend it a little. But other than that I think your content was good and up to date. I also liked the last paragraph how you summed up everything which was not done before you're editing. But I feel like more content is needed especially in the history section of 1980-1990

Tone & Balance
The content added was neutral, it was just informative not choosing any side. There might be some viewpoints underrepresented but for the majority it was fine

Sources & References
From the sources that I did understand they seemed reliable but there are a lot that were from news websites its best to minimize using those kind of sources. I noticed that someones name is in red because you tagged their article but there isn't an article for that person, personally I think you should take the tag out and just write their name.

Organization
The organization of the article is one of the best things in this article. It is very organized by year and information. The only real problem for me would be the lead which does not give information of the article as a whole.

Final Notes
Overall the content added to the article has only added value to the piece. the content added is neutral and informative but most importantly it is relevant. Something to help the content would be fixing the lead adding more information and adding more to the content added in the other sections