User:Epickerill/Ivy League/Adisriram123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Epickerill


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Epickerill/Ivy_League?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The beginning of the article could be started differently to set up the discussion (ex: During this time, there were no official polices...)
 * Can tell a great amount of research has been put into this!
 * Maybe can talk about people's perception with the integration of Black students in the Ivy League and the people who were the most for it and against it
 * Can talk about instances of racism on campus when Black students were integrating and even recently
 * Lots of great references