User:Epickerill/Ivy League/Hgarth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Epickerill/Ivy League


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Epickerill/Ivy League


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ivy League

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi all,

Overall this looks good so far, good number of diverse and credible sources. Are you also planning to fill in info about Princeton and the other Ivies speifically? I think you should plan to add more specificity for each place similar to how you incorporated Harvard into what you have. Also are there specifics related to race that you can add to the other sections of the article like Sports? or Social Elitism? Culture? I think its better to incorporate some info across the entire page in addition to expanding what you have done here.