User:EpirosBU/Hemigrapsus crenulatus/Amhughes1138 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EpirosBU


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Hemigrapsus crenulatus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hemigrapsus crenulatus

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks great! You definitely got all the basics down as far as habitat, coloring, mating, and even behavior!

I removed a couple of the sections in parenthesis just to make it look more complete and incorporate all of your thoughts together (because they were great thoughts!). I also added links to a couple "vocab" words like chiliped and the zoologist Mary Rathbun so people could look those things/people up directly from your article in case they don't know what/who they are.

If I were to add anything, I would maybe include a photo of the hairy chilipeds, as that seems to be an important aspect of the crab's anatomy and also I am just really curious to know what that looks like!

Overall, awesome work - definitely can learn a lot from reading this :)