User:Erazo2021/California Pesticide Drift Exposure Response Act (SB 391 Florez-Escutia)/Nmart28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Erazo2021


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your work looks good but you should add more information about the pesticide drift and why it was bad. Explain about what exactly the pesticide drift is. Explain how it affected people. Go into detail on what pesticides are and what they are used for and how they are bad to people and why they are used for crops.