User:Erazo2021/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
California Department of Public Health

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article as it relates the To the general topic of California health that I want to focus on.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article is very good in regards to introducing the reader into what the topic is. However, this lead does not really include brief discussions about some of the important sections of the article. Rather the lead chooses to focus on the what the overall department focuses on and some history in regards to the directors in charge of the department. I believe that the lead might be a little overly detailed as it should mainly give a summary of the topic rather than focusing on adding extra detail in regards to the directors.

The tone of this article is overall good as it seems to maintain a neutral stance in regards to the topic. It also mainly focuses on stating facts rather than using persuasive language to convince the reader.