User:Eresha8/Hypnotherapy/Birmaniahern Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Eresha8)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eresha8/Hypnotherapy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hypnotherapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes to the article are described very boldly and it's a very good change. When reading the article, there was a lot of unnecessary information included in the article that you have not incorporated which was very helpful in reading. I did enjoy the fact that you included a different type of hypnotherapy technique, Aikido. This wasn't included in the original article which was very interesting to read about. I also found it very helpful to that you included a meta-analysis from 2022 to give readers a recent perspective on the efficacy of hypnotherapy. Overall, the article is very well-developed and you have a numerous amount of resources which backs up all of your changes to your article. Your article is very well-composed and it flows together very well.