User:Eresha8/Hypnotherapy/Hkhan11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eresha8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eresha8/Hypnotherapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hypnotherapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe this a good start. I like how you have incorporated how hypnotherapy has been used across different cultures, and with regards to Aikido, you could add a quick brief history of its origin, and maybe even put a brief description on how Aikido works. Within the section of uses, I see that you had listed hypnotherapy for anxiety disorders. You'll probably add more to that section but adding uses for other psychiatric disorders if appropriate. I'd also, if you'd like, add an graphic with the steps with one of the Aikido uses. I'd also add in the beginning more forms of hypnosis, as I believe earlier back then, was used for disorders relating to substance use. All in all, the article that you have reviewed is concise and coherent, and sources are up to date as well. Lead is being worked on, but as a suggestion, you could add the beginnings and possibly tie it to Freudian therapy.