User:Ergyyq/Sorosis/Rush1970 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ergyyq


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ergyyq/Sorosis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sorosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The information in the draft is very beneficial in filling a large information gap in the original article, which is the actual activities of the club. Maybe the inclusion of specific examples of symposium topics could help in providing more detailed information about the club and its impact. Additionally, sources are absent throughout the article, so it may be beneficial to examine those. I think the writing style is very fitting to that standard tone of Wikipedia, and, so, I would definitely like to incorporate a similar tone into my article addition.