User:Eric.collazo94/Binaural recording/Jwozniak19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Eric.collazo94


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eric.collazo94/Binaural_recording?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Binaural recording

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Eric!

This was a great addition to the binaural recording wikipedia and I definitely think you're on the right path here with what you want to add to the article. Your sources are strongly in support of what you added which definitely helps in general. The picture you added was an excellent addition to the page overall and it definitely gives a solid visual cue for the plug in that you were talking about.

One general thing that I would continue to edit and work at is the specificity of what you're talking about. I thought the last part when you brought up a quote of somebody talking about the plug - in was very effective at doing this, maybe adding more in general or just boosting what you already have. Also a little thing I would address "mics" as microphones, really does not seem like the biggest deal but I feel it'll make it flow more professionally.

- Jack Woz