User:EricDart/Müggelsee/Klikata Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) EricDart


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Müggelsee


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Müggelsee

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The lead paragraph has a good amount of information about the physical qualities of the lake and the location. I like how the formation is included within the information provided. It is concise with clear flow. There may be some specific information as you get further into the lead section, but that might just be the body of your page as this section is larger than the other sections included on your page.

Content:

Your page seems a bit short, but you may have more things to add as I do too so I would say just add more details about maybe some limnology that has been done on this lake and any studies that may have been done here. The etymology section is a bit confusing. I think you should reword this content to make it more clear for readers who are not familiar with this. All content, though, is relevant. I think you should just add more things about lake research within this area. The column on the side of quick facts and information looks really good with the picture of the lake and the map.

Tone:

The tone is all neutral as it should be and unbiased.

Sources and References:

I really like the use of the links to other Wiki pages that you mention within your writing. You have enough references and do a good job including them throughout the writing. You only have a few in text citations, though, and may need to include in some more areas where specific information is added like in the etymology paragraph and the 3rd and 4th paragraphs. Otherwise, looks good.

Images: I think your images are good, but it would be cool if you could add an image of the lake with the labeled inflow and outflow connections labeled as well. I'm not sure if this picture is available, but that would be informational and show more geographic impacts that bring the water contents into the lake.