User:Eric Heldt/Arboreal locomotion/Kleaslemon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eric Heldt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eric Heldt/Arboreal locomotion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Arboreal locomotion

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Personal opinions, no mean of offense) I compared back and forth your draft and the original wiki article page, I think your edition is reasonable and useful to readers. However, due to the nature of our class project, you probably want to focus on research now. You will need three references to add some new subtopics to this article (or appropriate informational extension to one single subtopic). If you struggle on the direction of what to research on, you could go to professor Lee and she can quickly exam the original wiki article for you.