User:ErickPT007602693/Jorge Gallardo/Gabyamparan Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

-       Yes the lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by me.

-       The lead includes an introductory of the artist under the early years tab. This sentence informs the reader of who the artist is.

-       The lead includes sections of early years, upcoming life as an artist, trips, and his paintings.

-       The lead gives great information of the artists life, while not overloading the viewer with information.

Content

-       The content added is relevant to the artists life and journey of developing into the artist they were.

-       The content is dated from the artists birth and follows through the paintings and poem date, then ends with the year of the artists death

-       All content belongs and is organized into clear categories.

-       the content does address any historical event that went on during this time.

Tone and Balance

-       The content is favorable and natural. There isn’t a hardship the artist went through, so the article is relatively positive perspective on their career.

-       There are not any claims that appear heavily biased towards a position.

-       I think more information could be shown about his artwork and journey to getting to where he was. The information is there, but should be looked at more deeply.

-       The content doesn’t persuade the reader to do anything but learn about the artists life and artworks.

Sources and References

-       The leads article is backed up by ten different sources. The sources have reliable dates relating to the artists life and Accomplishments. The sources also give information on his artwork.

-       The lead chose trusted sources to accurately give correct dates and information.

-       The articles are thorough and are mostly written in Spanish. Some articles are just a timeline that can help the lead be organized with all the given information from other sources.

-       The articles range between the 2007 until current. Four articles are from 2020 and now compared to six articles 2019 to 2007.

-       The articles are mostly in Spanish, which is great being that Jorge Gallardo is born in Costa Rica and did most of his work in Mexico.

-       I believe the lead gathered the best sources available to them in order to give them the best information for this project.

-       All links work

Organization

-       The content is concise, clear and easy to read and follow along.

-       There are zero grammatical errors in the given article.

-       The content is well organized in different sections, making it easier to grab the attention of what the reader wants to know about the artist.

Images and Media

-       The article does not have any media to enhance the topic.

New articles

-       The article is supported by over three articles.

-       The list of sources accurately represents all available literature on the subject