User:Ericklemusss/Educational inequality in the United States/Grace.jana07 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ericklemusss


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ericklemusss/Educational_inequality_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Educational inequality in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Woah, I learned a lot from that paragraph you added -- very well-written and informative. The only things I'd offer:

- I changed some punctuation where you'd cited the source before "." and didn't change anything else about your draft I pinky-promise.

- Can you go through and add hyperlinks? Like for eugenics and Whittier State School (which I hope has a Wiki page?)

I really don't have anything else; your contributions are awesome. Hope you're having an awesome week :)