User:Ericklemusss/Educational inequality in the United States/Kangaboo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ericklemusss


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ericklemusss/Educational_inequality_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Educational inequality in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The new section adds to the article well by introducing eugenics. You could potentially make the transition more smooth with the previous topic. It seems the entire addition is about the Whittier State School and may benefit from having other examples. You could potentially incorporate research that you found that connects to sections already present in the article in addition to adding this new section.