User:Ericksmd3839/Huntington's disease/Bpertzborn20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ericksmd3839)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ericksmd3839/Huntington%27s_disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Huntington's disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
First of all great job! You were able to add lots of important details to the article and gave a better insight into what Huntington's disease truly is. I thought it was important that you specified what sex-independent genes are and how they may affect a person. I also really like how you added specific statistics and numbers to make this article valid. A suggestion I have for you would be to add more information about juvenile Huntington's disease such as the number of kids who get it or signs and symptoms, and possible treatment. I would try to keep all of the juvenile Huntington's disease together as it seems a little spread out throughout the article. It confused me when I was reading when you introduced juvenile Huntington's disease in the 2nd paragraph therefore I wasn't if you were talking about Huntington's or juvenile Huntington's disease. Possibly double-check your citations as I couldn't find any in your bold text. (That may be my mistake not finding them) Possibly add another sentence about why people who have this disease commit suicide. That is an important part to go into detail. You were able to keep the article neutral without making any claims about a particular position. Overall, you did a great job improving this article and adding more detail to the article.