User:Erikaerika222/Nicholas Hlobo/Amareymck Peer Review

This group has not yet started their draft but they have started an outline for their page. The outle includes addimg information to biography, adding more sources, adding artist's quotes, and adding more photos of artworks and a paragraph or two about it. This is exactly what the true article needs. I believe that this group is starting off on a great foot. The true article could use an exhibition paragraph.

General info

 * Erikaerika222/Nicholas Hlobo

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erikaerika222/Nicholas_Hlobo?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nicholas Hlobo

Evaluate the drafted changes
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