User:Erikaerika222/Nicholas Hlobo/GCF2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Erikaerika222


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erikaerika222/Nicholas_Hlobo?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I can see, this is the start of a plan that looks like it will be thorough. I think that making a bullet list helps out a lot. Maybe add some sub sections to it? it might make things easier.