User:Erildape/Fates/ElleKnowsBest1922 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Erildape


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erildape/Fates?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fates

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at your lead section of the article, I really like what you added! The things you added are just enough to know some context, but leaving some room for more coverage later on in the page. The rest of the info is very detailed and organized and everything you wrote is cited. Your writing is also neutral as well. No complaints here!