User:Erindeguchi/Prostitution in the United States/Mramiramos02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Erindeguchi - Prostitution in the United States


 * Link to the draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erindeguchi/Prostitution_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erindeguchi/Prostitution_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
In terms of the sources being used, the links to the website and pdf work. They redirect straight to the said website and pdf. Each source is completely relevant to the article. They provide information on the legality of prostitution in certain areas and the specific programs about the people who essentially supported prostitution. It seems that each source is neutral, so there isn't a said bias. It also looks like there is a bit of repetition from the new information about Nevada that corresponds to information already in the article. The information does work well with the information in the article because it's a bit of the same information but reworded. It is concise and the program part is informative, but I don't see a reason for the Nevada details. There is a more elaborate paragraph in the article so I'm not entirely sure it's necessary. Overall, maybe just a bit more information that others on the talk page discuss like more historical information from other cities or states. It's a good start for information and I think once it's included, it will mix well into the article.